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David Niall Wilson Bram Stoker Award Winning author and poet

When I Was A Kid, They Told Me I'd Have One By Now... - short short story -

October 23, 2008, 10:50 am

flyingcar.jpg
flyingcar.jpg

She pulled back the curtains and glanced into the backyard. He was out there again. All she could see was his dirty jeans and one arm, the rest of Artie was tucked up under the hood of what had once been a lime-green AMC Gremlin. He’d picked it up ten years back for a hundred bucks from a hungry college kid who could no longer afford the duct tape and prayer it took to keep the thing rolling. Ten years.

Ginny rolled her eyes and let the curtain drop back into place, returning to the small pile of dishes she was washing. She wondered if he’d ever wake up.

Artie was a dreamer. When they were younger, she’d loved that about him. He could sit at a table and tell you about how the world was going to change. He’d talk about Science Fiction writers as if they were prophets, and scientists as if they were gods. His life hadn’t gone exactly as planned, but to his credit, that never slowed him down. Artie never got a degree…he dropped out and became a mechanic when Ginny got pregnant. He never complained…and he never quit dreaming.

He had t-shirts lining a drawer in his dresser. They ran the gamut of scientific geekery - but the one he’d had the longest, and the one that she regretted ever buying for him, hung on the wall over their couch. It was his mantra. It was her particular corner of lower heck. She couldn’t say hell. He was a good man, a good mechanic, and he paid the bills. He was gentle, and took care of her…but that damned GREMLIN — he was obssessed with it…sometimes she thought it was more important to him than she was.

The door opened, and Artie stepped inside grinning.

“What?” Ginny asked.

“It’s done,” he said.

Artie had said this before. For the second time in less than five minutes, Ginny rolled her eyes and turned back to her dishes. Artie watched her for a moment, then he ran into the living room, as he’d done a hundred times before, grabbed the t-shirt from the wall over the couch, and traded the old “Beam Me Up, Scotty,” shirt he’d been wearing for the only one that mattered. Then he rushed back out into the back yard, the door slamming behind him, and Ginny sighed.

A moment later, she heard the engine on the Gremline fire. SHe’d heard that sound so many times she thought she could make out separate pistons. It was a very smooth, purring sound. He was a very good mechanic. Maybe he should put the thing on eBay - it was probably an antique.

She waited for him to come slamming back in, pouting, and scratching his head. She waited for him to groan and grumble and return to his tools. The engine kept running. She fought the urge, then lost the fight. She pulled the curtains back again and glanced out.

Facing her, hovering at window level, Artie grinned through the windshield of the Gremlin, waving madly. She dropped the plate she’d been drying and it shattered. She tried to meet his gaze, but she couldn’t. Her eyes were locked on that t-shirt. That amazing freaking wonderful t-shirt.

It read. “Where the hell is my flying car?”

Artie turned, arced up over the back fence, and headed for the open sky.

-DNW

Chris Rodell

Chris Rodell says:

Yes! I hope it happens

Yes! I hope it happens exactly like that. I have to believe the scenario you so richly describe is going on in garages around the world right now.

And now I want an "I Want My Flying Car!" shirt. Love the picture, too!

Chris R.

www.EightDaysToAmish.com

David Wilson

David Niall Wilson says:

Hah!

See, your blog post made me post the story, because it just fit so well.  While we aren't flying yet, one of the engineers in our company here built a hovercar in his garage - and it works!  So I guess we aren't too far off.

David

Huntington Sharp

Huntington W. Sharp says:

Awwww.

Thanks for that. Never give up!

Huntington Sharp, Red Room

David Wilson

David Niall Wilson says:

Give up? Not me!

I have neither flying car nor bestseller yet (though my Star Trek novel was a USA bestseller for a day or two)...but the time is drawing nigh, I believe.

 Thanks for welcoming me to your site.

 David

Ivory Madison

Ivory Madison says:

Exactly

On my good days, I like to think I'm that guy, and all the time I like to think everyone can be that guy. You are definitely that guy. I love this story!

Ivory Madison
Founder and CEO, redroom.com

David Wilson

David Niall Wilson says:

Thanks!

You guys have really made me start to feel at home here.  Looking forward to dropping more stories into the mix.  I write books for money and longer stories for money - but sometimes a story like that one just needs to reach readers.  I want to have the t-shirt made.

David

Roy Steves

Roy Steves says:

t-shirt

Count me in on a pre-order!

Tony Gim

Tony Gim says:

Thanks for that!

This is my first comment on anything I have ever read here or any website ... ever! I don't have the ability to describe how much I enjoyed that story, but it did hit me on a lot of levels, so much so that I forwarded your story to everyone I know. Thank you for sharing it!

Tony Gim, Red Room

David Wilson

David Niall Wilson says:

Hey Tony!

Thanks...I appreciate that...this story is very very short, but it's one that made me feel good to write, and better to share.  Please, send people here....lots of people.   There are always more stories.

 

David

Abdelwahab Hammoudi

Abdelwahab Hammoudi says:

Did you mean that?

When you write "Artie never got a degree",did you mean that he is like Hemingway,Steinbeck or Thomas Edison ?They too had no degree at all,which didn't prevent them to become what they had

Best

Hammoudi.

David Wilson

David Niall Wilson says:

Well...yeah

That was part of the point...he learned it all on his own because it was what mattered to him. 

 David

Randy Wong

Randy Wong says:

good story

Every time I read this story, it brings a smile on my safe.  What a great little way to show persistence and hard work.

 You know, this reminds me of an old joke (can't remember from where)

 "Behind every successful man stands a very surprised woman"

Randy Wong

Belinda Marquez

Belinda Marquez says:

When I was young girl, i

When I was young girl, i used to ask for my mom why we have to go to the airport? But my mom didnt say anything. Now i read all your story getting me smile, however, i wish we can have flying car in the near future..

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