#5 graphic novel-in-progress: Tricks, Illustrated
Paul in Amsterdam, who has his own comics website, asked me questions, which I will answer at the bottom of this post.
So, this is what I finshed yesterday, and I want to show you a few tricks.
Below, you see I made an error. How do I get rid of it?
I use my Xacto knife and scrape away the extraneous lines. Don't dig too hard. Go gently and lightly with the knife or you'll dig a hole.
Then I take an electric eraser and make smooth the surface of the paper.
Et voila! All clean.
Here, I mask the border so I can begin painting. I actually have stopped masking because my control of the brush is pretty good.
And now that the border is masked, I am free to over paint.
Once the drafting tape is peeled away, I get a clean edge.
So by yesterday afternoon, I was done with this particular page of my graphic novel.
Tonight, I start typing up the next page of my comics script and begin drawing another panel tomorrow.
Paul's Questions answered:
1 Can you give us some background what makes a graphic novel different to a comic book?
I think Paul can better answer this question, but for me, comics represents all formats of sequential art, whether it's a daily strip in a newspaper or a longer work like the graphic novel, a term coined to encompass the longer narratives of the comics genre. The subject matter of the graphic novel can be the more traditional superheroes, or like my book in progress, "Forget Sorrow: A China Elegy," which is part history and part family memoir.
2 What makes you decide on how many panels in a page?
I type out a script for what I imagine would bring good flow for my story. Then I imagine the flow visually on Bristol board, how many ideas, dialogs, concepts, visuals will fit comfortably on one page. Since I am the writer and artist, I can play it by sight/ear. I don't follow the script too closely, and I continue to edit the dialog as I draw. If I find I can shrink some panels, I do so to give more room to something of more significance in a lower panel.
3 What (photographic) angle to draw a panel, how much is dialogue and how much is text ?
The angle is based on the desire for change and variation. I like the naive folk art style of China, so my perspective is never too drastic in the Western sense. I try to destroy dimensionality and the vanishing point. But then I'll throw in something from a more surprising angle--like the rooftop view--just to shake things up. I don't follow any rules.
Too much text can bog down the story, so a good balance is needed. Frequently there are pages without text at all. And these are important because they make the reader slow down. When the text is absent, the reader takes time to look at the visuals. These are like the caesura in poetry. A place to breathe. If we look at Seth's "It's a Good Life If You Don't Weaken," for example, he really luxuriates in panels sans text. I also think it all depends on the style the writer/artists. She has her own inclination for how much text, and how much visual. I've seen comics with entire pages of textual narration right next to a full page of panel narration as in Posey Simmond's "Gemma Bovary," a modern day spoof on Flaubert's "Madame Bovary." The latter is a great piece of art and literature.
What I love about the comics medium is that it is entirely in tune with the creator's own vision. There are no hard and fast rules. The story is more important than the visuals. If the visuals are gorgeous and the story is boring, it's going to be a less than great piece of comic.
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Thomas Dotson says:
Oh this is absolutely wonderful....
Belle this is great post, and is exactly the kind of wonderful advice, I love to see. Gosh I haven't touched water colors, or water color paper since college. Even seeing the electric eraser brought back memories.
I do have a question, are you using cold pressed water color paper for this?
Also, are you using a traditional horsehair and bamboo chinese brush?
Thank you again,
Thomas Dotson, redroom.com
Belle Yang says:
Stay Tuned, Me Friend Thomas
for the next post, where I will show you the tools of the trade.
The paper is Bristol Board--I prefer vellum to the slickety smooth. And the best paper is not Strathmore. Ask for Aquabee. These come in tablets of 11in x 14in.
No, I'm not using the Chinese brushes but Princeton brand watercolor brushes. I'll show you these next post, too. These are inexpensive and better than the expensive Windsor & Newton series 7 brushes.
I'm so glad this is helpful. Much more to come!
James Whyle says:
I do like that cat on the
I do like that cat on the roof.
Jessica Barksdale Inclan says:
I have a student
Who will love all this. He was so curious about the art part of the graphic novel, and, as I have always maintained, I know nothing. Thank you for nuts and bolts One O One.
J
Jessica Barksdale Inclan www.jessicabarksdaleinclan.com
Dennis Shay says:
Cartoonists can't match Nature for "comical and cute."
Belle, check out Mother nature's cartoons.
This is for those that haven't seen the 16 baby pandas. SICHUAN , China -- One zoo in southwest China has its hands full with 16 baby pandas.
The Sichuan Wolong Panda Protection and Breed Center is dealing with the results of a breeding boom where 16 pandas have been born.
The brood includes five sets of twins.
The cubs are weighed and measured every five days (see pics)
The heaviest tips the scale at just over 24 pounds, while the lightest weighs about 11 pounds.
The pandas are due to stop suckling soon - just about the time they'll start learning to walk.
Once weaned, the panda cubs will attend panda kindergarten.
In the meantime, more little ones are expected at the centre since 38 giant pandas were artificially impregnated.
Now pass them along because they're just too cute to keep to yourself.
Belle Yang says:
Dennis,
Comics are not necessarily "cute." My comic book/graphic novel is history and tragic story at that.
Comic books range from super heroes to nonfiction, as mine is. "Epileptic" is not "cute" nor is "Maus."
I like pandas, all right, but what do they have to do with this thread?
Dennis Shay says:
Sorry that I trampled on your "thread" theme.
But, Belle, I was taken aback by these panda photos and the story accompanying them. A short ponder on who in Red Room would most appreciate seeing them, then I thought of you. What would be more apropos for a Chinese cartoonist than to stick a panda in here and there in her work, regardless of the significance?
But say, are you seeing the photos? When I checked your blog the photos were not replicated.
Belle Yang says:
Nope, I don't see 'em
Dennis. But I appreciate the thought :)
And you taught me an important lesson, I need to teach more people about graphic novels. I have to create an aundience since this format is still growing, maturing. People don't know what it is.
Dennis Shay says:
one last try to show you the pandas
Now pass them along because they're just too cute to keep to yourself.
sonshi (not verified) says:
Second Brother
Belle,
Regarding your panel. Thought you might find it interesting to know that in Vietnamese "anh hai" (anh means elder brother, and hai means second -- thus "second elder brother") is in fact the oldest brother. So the assumption is that "anh mot" (first elder brother) is the father -- although you would never say that. You would just refer your father as father.
As the middle child, I will say that "anh hai" commands instant respect, a concept I believe few Americans understand.
Sincerely,
Thomas