Cheryl L Snell fluent in subtext

What to do with the leftovers?

July 5, 2008, 2:14 pm

You thought I was talking about the rained-out picnic food? No-- I meant the fragments of poems and stories that wind up on the cutting room floor. What do you do with yours?

Images or lines from poems are not too difficult to springboard into new life. But what about the love scene for a character you ultimately decided should not grow up? Or the unneccessary backstory of a character, all dressed up in language with no place to go? Maybe it's the flint in me, but I hate for anything to go to waste.

Eric Nichols

Eric Nichols says:

We put them on Red Room

Lisa's Lament

So,
You woke up this morn with a hole in your head;
A bedpan was under your hips;
A bouquet of IVs was stuck in each vein
As slobber poured forth from your lips

You haven't a clue how you got in this place,
Of your brain, you've long been bereft;
Your name, once familiar, escapes you just now,
But take heart; we'll work with what's left

You think you were drinking some tea in L.A.;
That's odd, 'cuz we found you up here!
Wand'ring the tundra with nary a coat;
But we'll sort it out, don't you fear

You say you remember a jazz band that irked you,
And a purse of unusual skin
And an odd little key made of brass, with a stamp
That you found lying somewhere within

There there, little lady; you've had a rough day,
Don't bother us all with that sighing
'Bout that freezing sensation you've had all month long,
Most likely, it's those drugs we've been trying

So work with us, child; we know what we're doing,
We're physicians; of that be assured,
If there's anything left in that gourd on your shoulders,
We'll find it, and you will be cured.

Or not.

Eric P. Nichols, 2004

 

:)

 

eric

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Cheryl L Snell says:

Huzzahs!

Music to revise a shunt by, hmmm?

Cheryl Snell www.shivasarms.blogspot.com

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Matthew Biberman says:

Lowell on Bishop

You probably remember the wonderful poem of Lowell's about Bishop with its line about her leaving fragments pinned to the wall waiting for the last perfect word.

But the question is--would Bishop put them on her RR Blog? They seem like the perfect place for me. I am going through a line edit of my memoir now, and elements that are cast offs will probably end up posted here.

And as for your question about the weirdest place I have sold a book--I sold 150 on the infield of a race course, but, motorcycle guy that I am, that doesn't count.

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Cheryl L Snell says:

Well, why not

...put them up here? It can't be any more embarrassing than NaPoWriMo, all those drafts in their underwear.

150 copies at the race course? Man, I gotta get new friends.

Cheryl Snell www.shivasarms.blogspot.com

sonshi (not verified) says:

Sometimes

Sometimes garbage should be left there, especially when it came to my writing! :-)

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Cheryl L Snell says:

Oh, Thomas!

But othertimes, one man's trash is another man's treasure! (My mother told me that, so I can't argue with it).

Cheryl Snell www.shivasarms.blogspot.com