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June 13, 2008, 9:28 pm

 

Written on returning from the farmer's market:

Still Life with Sunflowers 

When I cut elastic from the sunflowers,

the stems, girdle-less now, spread

against the glass-lipped vase, each bloom

lolling like a tourist on a cruise.

You fed me blueberries from a colander,

and I looked over your shoulder at the still life

with nothing still about it-a sprawl of calyx

and corolla, pistils waving, rings of stamens

straining toward the ceiling so close

 to a sky full of bees.

When the pollen fell, it dusted the room

with a stain that yellowed the counter.

I never could get that color out,

though I'd easily kissed all the blue

from your fingers.

Belle Yang

Belle Yang says:

Wow

Do you ever write in meter or ever conscious of the meter even in free verse?

Cheryl Snell

Cheryl L Snell says:

Thanks, Belle!

My attempts to write in meter are very stilted, I'm afraid. When I write, I am conscious of meter, but in the loosest possible way. All those piano lessons must not have gone to waste entirely!

Cheryl Snell www.shivasarms.blogspot.com