Five Things to Avoid in a Query Letter

June 6, 2008, 4:34 pm

  1. Don't mention that you have always wanted to write. It is neither pertinent nor original.
  2. Don't confuse the verb "quote" with the noun "quotation." There is no tolerance for mistakes in grammar in a query letter.
  3. Don't pitch more than one book at a time.
  4. Don't refer to your novel as a "fictional novel." By definition, a novel is fiction.
  5. Don't overuse exclamation marks, question marks, or sentence fragments.

Additionally, avoid using italics for internal thought--both in your query letter and in your novel. Agents recognize italics as a crutch to avoid writing better transitions and point-of-view.

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