Family ties...
dime on the sidewalk
Mom's gentle reminder
to tithe
I don't always use the classic 5-7-5 haiku
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dime on the sidewalk
Mom's gentle reminder
to tithe
I don't always use the classic 5-7-5 haiku
Sue Glasco says:
Nice, Nancy
I like this. I felt the child's tension. Amazing what can be communicated in such a few syllables!
Nancy Smith says:
a few syllables..
Sue,
That's one of the reasons I like haiku...they are short, not necessarily sweet, and to the point. Another about a family member,
Queen Anne's lace
my grandmother's
rhinestone brooch
Sue Glasco says:
More Family Ties
Sweeter than nectar,
Softer than the day's warm breeze,
Great grandsons' sweet small faces.
Nancy Smith says:
ah, the ties that bind
Sue,
Grandsons, great or the plain-garden-variety kind, do have a way of wrapping themselves around one's heart. Thanks for sharing your 'ku!