Comments I've Written

• The two aliterating bruisers

  Ben and Brad,the broad Burgess, brothers baring big, seem likely for illustration.

• Who's Shelby

  Your prose is slicker than snot and Larry is the face Ill be looking for, maybe I can melt a face, maybe ther's an app for that. But, who's Shelby?

• Finally a clear space to read

  In a supportive motel reading chair, the type we never buy for our sparten city live/work spaces back in New York, a curtained window behind me letting in a sliver of Southern California early mornin